For all of you, poor souls ...

This is a magnificent idea. The words are a sharp reminder about things going on in the world that some people choose to ignore. It's so sad and yet you've managed to write it in such a way that makes the readers think of the lost people with a beautiful feeling. The only thing I could suggest about it is purely visual and nothing to do with the writing itself as that is perfect the way it is. I think it looks a little too structured in some way, it might have looked better if you'd centered it maybe? You could also try having the ribbon a bit bigger. I like the black with the white strip at the bottom though. Beautiful work, well done.